Kia ora Ranginui, good work in showing the phases of the moon. You showed the crescent shape changing. Maybe if you changed the background colour to the same as the black part it would just show the crescent changing. from Mrs Torrie
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Kia ora Ranginui,
ReplyDeletegood work in showing the phases of the moon. You showed the crescent shape changing.
Maybe if you changed the background colour to the same as the black part it would just show the crescent changing.
from Mrs Torrie
Thank you for your comment next time I would change the background.
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